Sumiko Minamino
Jul 22 2004, 11:22 PM
Sumiko Minamino: Hiiii guys?? What’s up?? Not to much in my life that’s 4 sure. This is my first fanfic of Yuu Yuu Hakusho and the second one of all the fics I have created n_n
Yusuke: You’ve only have created three ¬¬U
Sumiko: soooo????
Yusuke: You’ve only posted two. The first one you never finished and left it abandoned somewhere in your computer files and the third one is still in your notebook. Why is it that you can never finish anything???
Sumiko: well, that’s ‘cause my fics are too long. I have a tendency to make very looooooooong stories. But that makes it more fun nn
Yusuke: ...
Sumiko: Well I’ll do the disclaimer this time. i don’t own yuu yuu hakusho or any of it characters and stuff, ‘cause if I would Kurama might have a girlfriend by now nn
Yusuke: what is it with you and Kurama geez... looking around the bedroom there are posters of Kurama all over your room.
Sumiko: Well, I just think he’s cute nn
Yusuke: How come you don’t have any posters of me????
Sumiko: ‘cause you have a girlfriend remember???
Yusuke: and what does that have to do with all of this??
Sumiko: ‘cause I’m in love with Kurama. If I were in love with u I would have lots of your posters n_n
Yusuke: o.O ohh then thank gawd you don’t!!
Sumiko: ¬¬ i’m seriously thinking ‘bout buying some!!
Yusuke: o.O
Sumiko: ok nn now on with the storie!!(beware of orthographic mistakes! I really do my best to avoid them believe me...)
Note:
* *means things that are doing or a way they’re feeling.
:: :: means sounds.
' ' means toughts
...- means being interrupted or stop talking quickly.
- - its used for locations and time.
A girl can’t change it all... but most of it
Ep I : New comrade, new mission.
Yusuke is fighting Suzaku, meanwhile Keiko and Botan are being attacked y the “zombies” that Suzaku controls thanks to those bugs that gets in your head and take control of your body and mind (a/n: sorry dunno the name U.U). Botan is hitted and has passed out, Keiko holds her...they’re surrounded and suddenly attacked by the “zombies”, when...
- School-
Keiko: YUSUKE!!!!
All of the “zombies” are beated by someone...
Female voice: Feww cleaning some sweat out of her forehead just in time...
Keiko: Surprised W-Who are you??
Female voice: I’m here to help you, Koenma sended me... oh! And don’t worry, Yusuke will be just fine blinks; he’ll be back soon, you’ll see...
The girl fades away
Keiko: ...thank you...oh! Right we have to get out of here *climbs the fainted Botan on her back* come on Botan!
Later on, Yusuke won the battle against Suzaku, getting back the flute and releasing the “zombies” out of the insect’s control. Yusuke is resting on Kuwabara’s place...(a/n: did u actually thought I was gonna describe the whooooooooooooole episode and the battle thing??? Well no... it’s TOO DAMN LONG so NO THANK U) when he woke up...
- Kuwabara’s place -
Yusuke: *sitting on the bed roughly* what the...-
Kuwabara: You’re up! Good it was already time...
Kurama: Remember how wounded he was when we founded him Kuwabara; you should be grateful he is up.
Kuwabara: not really...
Yusuke: hey, what about Botan and Keiko??
Kuwabara: um...well...*grief upon his face*
Kurama:...*looking a side, his bangs covering his face*
Yusuke: *grabbing Kuwabara’s collar* WHERE ARE BOTAN AND KEIKO!!??
The door opens
Botan: Hey! Here we are!! nn
Kuwabara:... *trying no to laugh*......... JAAJAJAJAJAJAJAJA!!!
Kurama: *chuckling* I told him it wasn’t a good idea...
Yusuke: Whaa... YOU MADE ME THINK THEY WERE DEAD!!
Botan: Well, it’s thanks to Yusuke we are ok right?
Keiko: and also the girl who saved us
All: what!??
Yusuke: *glaring to a very surprised Botan* Botan weren’t you there??
Keiko: Botan was unconscious. I’ll tell you what happened...
Keiko tells them the whole thing (a/n: yes u right. I’m damn lazy at writing all over again but understand me onegai V.V)
Botan: Koenma-sama sended her? Mmm... did she tell you her name?
Keiko: no... but I got to see her face, she had brown eyes and long dark blue hair tied up in a ponytail, with long bangs in each side of her forehead (a/n: think Shishiwakamaru’s bangs)
Kuwabara: wow seems to be a hottie! ^o^
Yusuke: well let’s ask Koenma! *walks to Botan*
Keiko: *snatches Yusuke’s collar form the back* Oh no! you’re not! You’ll find that out tomorrow, right now you have to go home and let your mom know you’re ok. She’s been worried sick about you. *pushes Yusuke outside* good bye guys!
everybody waves good bye
Botan: Bye Yusuke,Keiko nn;
the door closes
Botan: Well, I’ll go ask Koenma-sama about "her". Meet me here tomorrow at 10.00 am, I’m also telling you your next mission *leaving on her oar* oh! And don’t forget to tell Yusuke and Hiei!!
Kurama and Kuwabara wave good bye
Kurama: I guess I should be leaving too, I have to help my mother with some things (a/n: What a sweetie) good bye Kuwabara *walks to the door*
Kuwabara: ok, see ya’.
Outside Kurama is walking... while someone standing in the ceiling of a house near by looks at him from afar...
¿?: Can’t believe I finally founded you... Youko.
Kurama glares were the silhouette was standing, but it fades away before he can even look...still he keeps searching the place
Hiei: *standing on a tree branch while leaning on the tree* someone was here...
Kurama: Yes but whom? And... was it a Youkai?
Hiei: I don’t know either, but it was a Youkai no doubt. It had a really strong reiki
Kurama: *finally giving up the search* ... never mind, I should be better get going. Tomorrow we’ll met with Botan at Kuwabara’s place, there’s going to be a new mission.
Hiei: Hn
- Next day- Saturday: 10.05am-Kuwabara’s place-
Yusuke: Why is Botan taking so long?? Damn it she knows I hate to waste my weekends...¬¬
Kuwabara: Cool down Urameshi it has only been 5 min.
Yusuke: ¬¬#
Kurama: here she comes
Botan: Hi guys! Sorry I’m kinda late nn
Yusuke: can you tell us what the hell took you so long!!!!!
Botan: Relax Yusuke I’m here right?? “It’s always better late than never”, right?
Yusuke: ¬¬ feh!, fine.
Kurama: and... what did Koenma said?
Botan: well, he said...
every one looks intrigued at Botan
Botan: ... it would be better if you come to the Reikai so he can explain you better nn
everyone falls anime style
Yusuke: But who the hell does he think he is!!!
Botan: *chuckling* the prince of the Reikai? *teasing at Yusuke*
Yusuke: JA JA very funny!!
Kurama: let’s just go Yusuke; what do we have to lose?
Kuwabara: Kurama is right Urameshi.
Yusuke: FINE!
Hiei: Hn, baka ningens
-Reikai- the door of Koenma’s office-
Botan: KOENMA-SAMA!! Here are Yusuke and the others!!
Koenma: ok come in guys!!
-Koenma’s HUGE door office opens-
Koenma: Hi guys. I’m glad you came.
Yusuke: Make it quick!
Botan: *mumbling to Koenma* he’s just upset because he was gonna ask Keiko out *chuckles*
Koenma: ok. First of all I’ll introduce the girl who saved Botan and Keiko. Her name is Kiyumi, she’s a kitsune/water youkai reincarnated in a human body, pretty much like Kurama. In her human form she’s now 14 years old. Ever since she was 6 she has been living here at the Reikai due to her human parents dead.
Female voice from outside: Koenma-sama, I’m here as you have requested.
Koenma: Oh right! Come on in! *the HUGE door opens and the girl walks in letting the light get to her giving a clear sight of her* Guys, this is Kiyumi. Kiyumi these are the Reikai tanteis:*pointing each of them*Urameshi Yusuke, Kuwabara Kazuma, Jangashi Hiei and Minamino Suichi (a/n: I dunno if Hiei’s last name was supposed to be unknown, since I haven’t finished watching all of the episodes I have barely made it to the end of the dark tournament so forgive me if it does T.T)
Kiyumi: Hi. glances at everyone in the room, then her eyes get set on Kurama giving him a much dissimulated hate glance
THE REIKAI TANTEI’S POV
Yusuke: 'what a body!! Man I wish Keiko were like that...'
Hiei: 'The onna is strong, I can barely feel her reiki... might she be the one that yesterday?... hn...'
Kuwabara: 'WHAT A HOTTIE!! ...–pervert thoughts-'
Kurama: 'why is she looking at me like that? I don’t I have seen her before...have i?'
Kuwabara: *mumbling to Yusuke and Kurama, since Hiei was on a corner as usual and he didn’t like him* She’s hot isn’t she??
Yusuke: I think she just glared at u Kurama n.U *elbowing him* She likes u!
Kurama: I don’t think that was a friendly glare...
Kuwabara: why is it that Kurama ALWAYS gets all the cuties T.T
Yusuke: ‘cause he’s not as ugly as u are (a/n: I think we ALL agree with that U.U)
Kuwabara: Why YOU...-
Yusuke: ‘cmon Kuwabara, learn to deal with the truth U.U you’re ugly says while clapping Kuwabara’s back (a/n: I think Yusuke speaks 4 us all who just DON’T LIKE Kuwabara, sorry Kuwabara fans... if he has any)
NORMAL POV
Yusuke: oh right! *walks towards Kiyumi* thank u for savin’ Keiko and Botan.
Kiyumi: Don’t need to thank me; I was just doing my job.
Koenma: Ok guys, now that you know each other already it’s time to tell you that Kiyumi is joining your team Yusuke.
Yusuke, Kuwabara and Kiyumi: WHAT??????
Yusuke: She is ACTUALLY joining us???
Kuwabara: but she’s just a girl!
Kiyumi and Botan: AND WHAT THE HELL DOES THAT HAS TO DO WITH ANYTHING?????
Kiyumi: I’m sorry Koenma but I AM NOT JOINING THEM.
Koenma: And why’s that?
Kiyumi: Personal reasons. Besides I work better by myself.
Koenma: That is not an acceptable answer
Kiyumi: screw you and your acceptable answers!! *leaves trough the door and shuts it strongly*
Koenma: She’s a bit rebel, but don’t worry; she’ll be back (a/n: doesn’t it remind u terminator??? XD)
Yusuke: and why didn’t u tell us anything ‘bout she joining us!!??
Koenma: I’m telling you now
Yusuke: ¬¬
Koenma: ok now with the mission. Have you ever heard about youkai hunters??
Yusuke: does it seem that I have????? I’ve been living in Ningenkai not Reikai!! so spit the concept toddler
Koenma: ¬¬# youkai hunters are actually a part youkai themselves; they’re called Hanyous. They have a great hatred towards certain kinds of youkais, for example wolfs, coyotes and kitsunes. Our hunter is a Kitsune hunter and his name is Yamimaru. He has hunted kitsune youkais like his whole life. Once he captures his prey he kills it and locks its soul in its body; then he hangs the bodies in what he calls his “trophy hall”
Yusuke: so the guy is a psychopath who likes to kill kitsunes right??
Koenma: Exactly. But something really strange has happened... he has been recently seen in the Ningenkai.
Hiei: So that means... he chased his prey to the Ningenkai or... he knows there’s a kitsune living in it.
Kurama: Might he be trying to hunt me?
Koenma: I don’t know... you see... you are not the only kitsune youkai living in the Ningenkai...
Kuwabara: you mean that girl is also living in our world?
Koenma: Yes, that’s why I think it would be better if you keep an eye on her... and that you would watch your back Kurama.
Yusuke: Don’t you think you’re over reacting?? Kurama is quite strong, not to mention Kiyumi. I think they’ll be just fine.
Koenma: oh don’t miss understand me. I know they’re both quite strong, but that hunter could recourse to any kind of cunnings to catch his prey...
Kurama:...!! *a flash of Kurama’s mother* I have to go Koenma my mother might be in danger!!
Kurama runs a rushes trough the door
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Sumiko: wow! Do you actually think the psycho guy is going after Kurama’s mother??
Yusuke: You have been reading a lot of science fiction books now haven’t ya?
Sumiko: oh come on Yusuke, and I thought u knew me... it’s not that...maybe it’s ‘cause yesterday I saw terminator3: the rise of the machines nn
Yusuke: Yesterday?? I thought that movie was first performed last year!
Sumiko: yeap, but my dad rented it yesterday nn
Yusuke: and why didn’t you just saw it on the cinema when it first appeared?
Sumiko: dunno, back then I was more interested in watch Inuyasha the second movie than terminator nn ohhh I’m so excited!!!! I’m going to buy the third movie of Inuyasha since it’s already here in Peru!!!! Aaahhhh I can’t wait to see it.
Yusuke: weren’t you going to buy the movies of Yuu Yuu hakusho??
Sumiko: Yeap, later nn
Yusuke: ¬¬
Sumiko: Read and review!!!! Onegaishimasu!!! Otherwise I’ll make Yusuke do something that u won’t like...
Yusuke: o.O w-what are u going to do???
Sumiko: smirk
Yusuke: o.O I don’t like this!! REVIEW FOR MY SAKE!!!!!! AHHHHH GO AWAY!!! NOOOO!!!
Diosa
Jul 22 2004, 11:31 PM
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ayyys, Dioses, enviadme un traductor

, no entedí nada

, mi inglés nefasto y cutre

, hace que me pierda historias interesantes como estas.
Al menos un resumito en Español, por favorcito
Seguro que el fic está súper y no lo entiendo
Saludos
Sumiko Minamino
Jul 22 2004, 11:55 PM
Weno Diosa aca ta tu resumen!!
Este espisodio trata de q 'alguien' salva a Keiko en la batalla contra Zusaku, mientras Yusuke luchaba contra Zusaku. Keiko les cuenta esto a Yusuke y los otros y Botan les dice q se reuniran al dia siguiente en la casa de Kuwabara. Al dia siguiente todos van, pero Botan les dice q Koenma ha dicho q vayan a l Reikai (mundo espiritual) para q el mismo les explique. Asi todos llegan y Koenma les presenta a una chica de cabello azul amarrado en una cola alta de ojos marrones vistiendo un atuendo MUY revelador (weno no muxo). Koenma les explica q ella es una demonio kitsune/agua (osea una demonio zorro como Kurama, pero q controla el agua) y su nombre de demonio es Kiyumi. Les dice q ella se unira al equipo de Yusuke pero ella se rehusa por "motivos personales" pero Koenma se rehusa a aceptar esa respuesta y ella lo manda a la recontra *censurado*
Koenma les explica a Yusuke y los demas q tienen una mision, la cual es detener a un famoso cazador de Ktisunes llamado Yamimaru, q ultimamente ha sido visto en el ningenkai (mundo humano) algo bastante raro ya q no hay kitsunes (por lo menos no demonios) en el mundo humano. Sin embargo Tiene la sospecha de q su blancoo puede ser o Kiyumi o Kurama. Luego le explica a Kurama q este es un cazador muy astuto y q haria cualquier cosa con tal de atrapar a su presa. entonces Kurama recuerda a su madre y sale corriendo en su busqueda pues teme q Yamimaru le haya hecho algo...
Weno eso es todo ^^ si quieres reirte t sugiero t buskes un traductor
*o sino pidele a Dione q t lo traduzca ^^*
P.S: Este fic lo escribi yo solita T.T y es mi primer fic de Yu yu hakusho. Ojala les guste^^
Diosa
Jul 23 2004, 12:09 AM
Wooow, gracias por el resumen Sumiko Minamino, eres muy amable.

Y te felicito, porque estás escribiendo un fic que me parece súper interesante, y encima ¡¡en inglés!! (con lo negada que soy yo para el inglish

)
Me gusta la historia. Ánimo y sigue adelante
Hasta luego
S@G@
Jul 23 2004, 12:25 AM
Ai dont anderstaing nasing in inglish zorri pero muchas gracias por el resumen como dijo diosa muy amable de tu parte
Dione_Kido
Jul 23 2004, 01:29 AM
| QUOTE |
| Kurama: I guess I should be leaving too, I have to help my mother with some things (a/n: What a sweetie) good bye Kuwabara *walks to the door* |
siempre tienes k alagar a kurama no? XDD tas demasiado in love
| QUOTE |
| Hiei: Hn, baka ningens |
oh!!! hiei!! tan frio... k lyndo!! ese es mi hiei!!!
| QUOTE |
| -Koenma’s HUGE door office opens- |
hasta en lso fics eres mega exagerada verdad? relax relax
| QUOTE |
| Kuwabara: why is it that Kurama ALWAYS gets all the cuties T.T |
xq la escritor ama a kurama obiamente el va ser el protagonista!! y conociendola se va a kedar con las mejores!!
| QUOTE |
| Yusuke: ‘cmon Kuwabara, learn to deal with the truth U.U you’re ugly says while clapping Kuwabara’s back (a/n: I think Yusuke speaks 4 us all who just DON’T LIKE Kuwabara, sorry Kuwabara fans... if he has any) |
y yo? KUWABARA RULZ!! soy mega fan!! weno osea pimero esta shun y luego el!! asi k mas cuidadito no me lo malttrates a kuwabaka!! ok?
| QUOTE |
| Kiyumi: Personal reasons. Besides I work better by myself. |
ja!! estas sola estas frita!! jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
| QUOTE |
| Sumiko: dunno, back then I was more interested in watch Inuyasha the second movie than terminator nn ohhh I’m so excited!!!! I’m going to buy the third movie of Inuyasha since it’s already here in Peru!!!! Aaahhhh I can’t wait to see it. |
vamos juntas a comprarlo ok? XDDD mañana voy a tu casa su!! asi k !!
see yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Wolfk
Jul 23 2004, 02:07 PM
JEJEJE YA SABES QUE A MI ME GUSTO MUCHO TU FICK SUMIKO^^ Y TE QUEDO GENIAL, LO UNICO ESQUE LES FALTARON PELEAS PERO ESTA BIEN, ASI ESTA BIEN COMO LO DEJASTE. AUUUU SALUD!!!
PaoPao de Piscis
Jul 24 2004, 12:41 AM
Me gustó mucho tu fic Sumiko, pero esto sigue no

? No lo vas a dejar solo asi, porque yo ya quiero leer como sigue!

esta muy interesante.
Sumiko Minamino
Jul 25 2004, 10:26 PM
Holas!! graxias chik@s por sus apreciaciones!! y unas cuantas aclaraciones para Dione:
| QUOTE |
Kurama: I guess I should be leaving too, I have to help my mother with some things (a/n: What a sweetie) good bye Kuwabara *walks to the door*
siempre tienes k alagar a kurama no? XDD tas demasiado in love
xq la escritor ama a kurama obiamente el va ser el protagonista!! y conociendola se va a kedar con las mejores!! |
No es solo por eso. En TODOS los fanfics q participa Kurama SIEMPRE lo emparejan con una chica bonita *weno en todos los romanticos ^^*
| QUOTE |
| oh!!! hiei!! tan frio... k lyndo!! ese es mi hiei!!! |
No Dione... es MIO tmb!! jajajaja *no puedo evitarlo, tengo una tendencia a la infidelidad 
| QUOTE |
| y yo? KUWABARA RULZ!! soy mega fan!! weno osea pimero esta shun y luego el!! asi k mas cuidadito no me lo malttrates a kuwabaka!! ok? |
JAJAJAJAJAJAJA tenía q ser Dione
| QUOTE |
Kiyumi: Personal reasons. Besides I work better by myself.
ja!! estas sola estas frita!! jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa |
NO LO PUSE POR ESO YAAAAAAA!! lo puse para darle un aire de 'misterio' a la chika. nada más U.U
| QUOTE |
| vamos juntas a comprarlo ok? XDDD mañana voy a tu casa su!! asi k !! |
o.O oh no!!! me invaden!!!!!! o.OSayonara bye bye chik@s

p.s: Pronto subire el 2do episodio no c preocupen

^^
Sumiko Minamino
Jul 26 2004, 05:57 PM
Ok primero q nada gracias por sus reviews!!! aqui ta el segundo Episodio:
Yusuke: T.T why meeeee, WHY FROM ALL THE CHARACTERS OF YUU YUU HAKUSHO WHY YOU HAD TO PICK MEEEEEEE!!!!???????
Sumiko: ‘cause Hiei is too quiet, I like Kurama so much this section would get too boring and romantic, and I HATE Kuwabara.
Yusuke: WHAT ABOUT JIN??? TOGURO?? GENKAI?? KEIKO?? BOTAN??? KOENMA??? SHIZURU??? TOUYA??? SHAKU??? PUU?? YUKINA??????? KARASU???????????
Sumiko: Genkai, Toguro and Koenma are boring; Shizuru is Kuwabara’s sister ‘nah, I don’t do it ‘cause of that don’t worry I like Shizuru, she’s cool totally opposite to her bro’; Yukina is too polite; Botan is TOO cheerful; Touya… I just don’t know him quite well; Shaku is a drunken guy; Puu just says Puu; Jin is replacing u on your vacations already and Karasu… hey WHO TOLD U I LIKED KARASU???
Yusuke: o.O no one I just wanted to go away…T.T
Sumiko: look I DON’T LIKE KARASU OK!!!?? I just like his face and his hair that’s all. Besides I think he’s gay.
Yusuke: why???
Sumiko: ‘cause he said he liked Kurama and he held Kurama’s hair like if he was going to do something weird… and he said his hair was damaged and that he had to take care of it. Tell me what man gives a damn about his hair?
Yusuke: …
Sumiko: oh.. I forgot you’re Mr. I-use-lots-of-gel-on-my-hair.
Yusuke: SHUT UP!!! I don’t use lots of gel on my hair!!!!
Sumiko: and what do u use then??? Soap??????
Yusuke: -.-
Sumiko: o.O U USE SOAP ON YOUR HAIR!!!!???
Yusuke: Ok now on with the story!!!! n.n
Sumiko: Yusuke u didn’t answer my question!!!! >.<
Note:
/…/ means things that are doing or a way they’re feeling.
:: :: means sounds.
‘…’ means thoughts.
…- means being interrupted or stop talking quickly.
- - it’s used for locations and time.
A girl can’t change it all… but most of it
Ep II: Things we didn’t expect to happen
-Reikai -Koenma’s office-
Koenma: oh don’t miss understand me. I know they’re both quite strong, but that hunter could recourse to any kind of cunnings to catch his prey…
Kurama:…!! ‘/a flash of Kurama’s mother/’ I have to go Koenma my mother might be in danger!! /Kurama runs a rushes trough the door/
Koenma: He’s right!! Yusuke, Kuwabara, Hiei!!! Go help Kurama!
Yusuke: No need to say it.
-Ningenkai-
Kurama is running as fast as he can to find his mother, as he gets to his house (a/n: yeap He lives with he’s mother, he’s only 15 ‘or 16?? XDD’ 4 Christ sake! ) he opens roughly the main door, still trying to catch his breath. Kurama looks around the house: the living room, the kitchen, all the rooms… nothing. He was starting panicking, if something had happened to his mother he could never forgive himself. This was all he’s fault he thought. If he weren’t a youkai… just a simple human being… no one would have any reason to hurt his mother, at least no youkai.
¿?: Suichi
Someone called him. It was a female voice that was for sure. But it wasn’t his mother. This voice sounded…younger. Suddenly he saw something that got all the worries he just had: He saw his mother save. No one could describe how happy he was to see his mother save and smiling while looking at him.
Shiori: Suichi you’re back! I thought you would be staying with your friends a little longer n.n
(A/n: 4 those who don’t know ‘like a friend o mine who asked me who’s Shiori? And earned a slap in the head .’ Shiori is Suichi’s mother)
Kurama: well… it didn’t got as long as I thought n.n
Then Kurama noticed a young girl standing next to her mother. She had long dark blue hair tied up in a ponytail and shiny brown eyes…
Kurama: /staring at the girl/ ‘K-Kiyumi????’
Shiori: Oh! Of course how could I have forgotten. Suichi this is Sumiko Sukiyaki (a/n: I got the last name from an orthographic mistake, this last name was Microsoft Word’s idea! XDD)
Kurama: Hum n-nice to meet you! n.n /kinda confused for what he just saw/
Kiyumi (a/n: or Sumiko??XD): nice to meet you Suichi n_n /shaking hands/… /getting her face close to he’s she whispers/ just act like you don’t know me I’ll explain later. /separating from Kurama/
Shiori: she’s he daughter of a friend of mine… a very good friend /gloomy face/. She just passed away last month… Since her daughter is now an orphan I decided to take care of her and let her live with us. She’s staying in your room tonight Suichi since the guest room is kind of filthy. I hope you don’t mind.
Kurama: Oh no mother, not at all.
Shiori: don’t worry Sumiko my dear; he’s a very respectful young man. (A/n: unlike many other guys that with a cute girl in their rooms… only god knows what they will do to them o.O)
Sumiko: I’m sure he is with a mother such as yourself Mrs. Minamino n.n
Shiori: you can call me Shiori darling n.n
Sumiko: ok Mrs. Shiori.
Shiori: oh but come on in sweethearts, I left the meal ready so we can lunch now n.n /pushing Sumiko and Kurama inside of the house/
Sumiko and Kurama: n.nUU
Yusuke, Kuwabara and Hiei arrive at the house running and then getting ready to fight
Kuwabara: All right!! Bring me those demons!! I’ll kick their butt!
Shiori, Kurama and Sumiko: o.O
Kurama and Sumiko: ~Shit!! Kuwabara it’s going to blow it!!~ Ôo
Yusuke: Kuwabara you just made a fool of yourself *trying not to use strong words in front of Kurama’s mother*
Shiori: S-Suichi are those your friends?? n.nUUUU (a/n: n.nU means smiling and sweat dropping 4 those who don’t know)
Kurama: u-um yeah! Mom these are Kuwabara Kazuma, Jangashi Hiei and… I think you already know Yusuke
Shiori: oh yes the boy that went with you at the hospital when I was ill, I remember him n.n such a sweet boy.
Yusuke: ‘ I wish my mom were like that T.T’
Shiori: oh right do you want to join us for meal??
Yusuke and Kuwabara: Yes!! Thank u Mrs. Minamino!!!
Shiori: n.n
Kurama: V.V *sighs*
-Inside-
Kurama, Shiori and Sumiko are eating. Shiori making comments to Sumiko about how Kurama was when he was a baby, embarrassing Kurama who was trying to cut in every time he’s mother was about to make a comment about certain things he did as a child he’d rather keep in secret; for example, a 9 year old running around his house naked XDD (a/n: I don’t know if he actually did that but I would had been something REALLY embarrassing if his mother had told that to a person he had recently met; ESPECIALLY A GIRL, not to mention his friends XDD) Yusuke and Kuwabara were laughing crazy. Finally then ended eating and started chatting ‘til it got reaaaaally late; then Yusuke and Kuwabara left to their houses, since Hiei had disappeared sometime between meal and chatting.
-Yusuke’s House-
Yusuke: Mooooooooomm I’m home!!!
::silence::
Yusuke: damn it!! She went out to drink again!!! Man I really wish she were like Kurama’s mother /remembers Kurama’s red face while his mother was talking about the running-in-the-house-naked thing/ mm I think I’ll just keep my mom n.nU
Botan: YUSUKE!!
Yusuke: waaaa!! Botan don’t scare me like that!!!
Botan: Tell me what happened???? Koenma is worried sick!!!
Yusuke: oh right!! I forgot Koenma! n.n
Botan: WHAT HAPPENED!!?? Òó
Yusuke: o.O ok ok relax. Nothing happened; we just ate meal with Kurama’s mother. She’s fine.
Botan: you mean there was no demon!!???
Yusuke: U.U nop U.U
Botan: thank god!! Ok then I’ll go to Kurama’s then. I have a message to send him. See ya /leaves on her oar/
Yusuke: geez what a woman
-Kurama’s house- Suichi’s room- 11.30pm-
Next to Kurama’s bed there was another one Shiori and Sumiko with the help of Kurama had set on for Sumiko to sleep in, Shiori brings some pajamas to Sumiko.
Shiori: There you go dear /hands Sumiko a long short sleeved white t-shit and a kinda grey-white short/ tomorrow we’ll go shopping to get you some more clothing n.n
Sumiko: oh but you don’t need to Mrs. Shiori I can handle myself with what I got n.n
Shiori: oh no my darling I can’t leave you with so few clothes; besides should take it as a welcome gift since you’re living here now honey.
Sumiko: But…
Shiori: no buts accepted. Good night pumpkins n.n
Kurama: good nigh mother n.nU
Sumiko: good night Mrs. Shiori n.nU
Shiori shuts the door
Kurama and Sumiko stare at each other…
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Sumiko: OH MY GOD!!! I’M SLEEPING WITH KURAMA!!!!!!!
Yusuke: You’re so sick
Sumiko: what do u mean??? o.O I hope u are not thinking I meant … u know actually sleeping with Kurama. I meant that I was sleeping in the same room
Yusuke: o.O ohh that’s what u…- i-I mean yeah that’s what I thought!! n.n
Sumiko: No u didn’t!!! u fucking pervert!!!!! U thought the ‘other’ meaning!!!
Yusuke: No I didn’t!!
Sumiko: yes u did!!
Yusuke: no I didn’t!!
Sumiko: Did too!!
Yusuke: did not!!!
Sumiko: DID TOO!!
Yusuke: DID NOT!!
Sumiko: DID TOO!!
Yusuke: DID NOT!!
Sumiko: YOU’RE A PERVERT ADMIT IT!!
Yusuke: NO I’M NOT!!
Sumiko: THEN WHY DID U LIFTED KEIKO’S SKIRT WHEN U WERE IN SCHOOL IN THE FIRST EPISODE HUH??!!! THAT’S BEIN’ A PERV!!
Yusuke: hum then… YOU ARE OBSSESED WITH KURAMA ADMIT IT!!
Sumiko: yes I’M OBSESSED so what????
Yusuke: o.O not fair!!
Sumiko: JAJAJAJAJA readers!!! PLEASE Read and review!!!!!! n.U
Yusuke: tell her fic sucks!!!!
Sumiko: # ok U ASKED 4 IT!!
Yusuke: o.O OH no what are u doin’ with tha… AAAAAHHH HELP!!!!! LET ME GO!!! NOOO GET THOSE SCISSORS AWAY FROM MY HAIR!!! AAAAAAAHH NOOOOOO… NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T.T
PaoPao de Piscis
Jul 28 2004, 01:46 PM
Esta segunda parte tambien me gusto mucho Sumiko, ahora se esta poniendo muy interesante
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Sumiko: look I DON’T LIKE KARASU OK!!!?? I just like his face and his hair that’s all. Besides I think he’s gay. |
Pobre Karasu...
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Yusuke: why???
Sumiko: ‘cause he said he liked Kurama and he held Kurama’s hair like if he was going to do something weird… and he said his hair was damaged and that he had to take care of it. Tell me what man gives a damn about his hair? |
Bue, tengo que admitir que la primera vez que lo vi pense lo mismo
Esta muy bueno tu fic
Sumiko Minamino
Aug 3 2004, 04:51 PM
Holas!! graxias por sus reviews!! especialmente a PaoPao de piscis!! graxias^^ weno ahora con el fic ^^
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Sumiko: Muahahahahahaha like your new hair cut Yusuke???????
Yusuke: you’re mean T.T
Sumiko: oh no, I’m not falling for that one… /shuts her eyes/
Yusuke: /puppy face/ my hair … you’re mean! T.T
Sumiko: /opens one eye/
Yusuke: T.T
Sumiko: awww ok ok. FINE you can go /hands him some papers/there. Now can you forgive me???
Yusuke: yay!!!! Finally. Ok I’ll forgive you… for cutting my wig! Jajajajajaja
Sumiko: o.O YOU MEAN YOU DID ALL OF THIS JUST TO GET YOUR FUCKING WEEK OFF!!??
Yusuke: exactly
Sumiko: I swear to god that one of these days…one of these days!
Yusuke: bye!! n.n
Sumiko: ¬¬
/Yusuke leaves/
Sumiko: o.O shit! Now who am I going to ask to replace Yusuke??? It was supposed that Yusuke’s vacations would be in a month, so I can’t call Jin… mmm… who to call… who to call… ok then meanwhile I look for someone to replace Yusuke let’s go on with the story! oh and I don’t own Yuu Yuu hakusho or any of it’s characters, but I do own Sumiko (or Kiyumi whatever) so if u wanna use her ask before!!
Voice: and who would want to?
Sumiko: uh??
Note:
/…/ means things that are doing or a way they’re feeling.
:: :: means sounds.
‘…’ means thoughts.
…- means being interrupted or stop talking quickly.
- - it’s used for locations and time.
A girl can’t change it all… but most of it
Ep III: a tough night
-Kurama’s house- Suichi’s room- 11.30pm-
Next to Kurama’s bed there was another one Shiori and Sumiko with the help of Kurama had set on for Sumiko to sleep in, Shiori brings some pajamas to Sumiko.
Shiori: There you go dear /hands Sumiko a long short sleeved white t-shit and a kinda grey-white short/ tomorrow we’ll go shopping to get you some more clothing n.n
Sumiko: oh but you don’t need to Mrs. Shiori I can handle myself with what I got n.n
Shiori: oh no my darling I can’t leave you with so few clothes; besides you should take it as a welcome gift since you’re living here now honey.
Sumiko: But…
Shiori: no buts accepted. Good night pumpkins n.n
Kurama: good nigh mother n.nU
Sumiko: good night Mrs. Shiori n.nU
Shiori shuts the door
Kurama and Sumiko stare at each other…
Kurama: ok, now would you mind explaining what’s going on here?
Sumiko: Sumiko is my ningen name. I used a mental trick to make your mother believe I was her friend’s daughter. I need a place to stay meanwhile I’m in the Ningenkai.
Kurama: And why my house??
Sumiko: ‘cause Koenma told me to live near by one of you so I won’t be hard to locate in case “we” have a mission; and what a better place to stay than one of the tanteis house. And I think you owe me a thank you since I took care of your mother ever since you said Koenma your mother would be in danger.
Kurama: /kinda surprised/ ohh so you never leaved…, thank you then. But how did you know who and where was my mother??
Sumiko: mages never tell the secret of their magic /blink/ now… can you tell me were can I get changed??
Kurama: Sure…uh… you can get changed here, I’ll get changed in the bathroom.
Sumiko: ok
/Kurama leaves and shuts the door/
/Sumiko sits on her bed next to Kurama’s/
Sumiko’s POV
‘why did I ended up here?? Geez… fate just likes to play bad moves on me… from all the places on earth I had to end up in Kurama’s house, and worst, his bedroom. I guess my “good heart” Is going to get me in trouble one of these days… but his mother doesn’t have the fault to have a demon son… in fact he has. If he hadn’t got almost killed back there in Makai he wouldn’t…-’
Sumiko: /whispering/ he… probably wouldn’t…
‘no… I can’t bring that memory of his again… I can’t bring him back!! Not after all that happened back there in Makai… I can’t. I’ll kill myself before I do.’ She starts undressing starting by taking her black vest and a white tank top she was wearing, then her black skirt and her also black high heels. (a/n: sorry forgot to do the description of her clothes before so I’m doing it now n.n)
Normal POV
A few minutes later…
Botan: HIII KIYUMI!!! n.n
Sumiko: AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! /covers her uncovered parts, what would be her chest/ Geez Botan!! You
scared me to death!!!(a/n: I’ve decided to call her Sumiko when she’s doing human stuff and Kiyumi when demon stuff, like fighting.)
Botan: jejejejeje sorry I didn’t mean to :3 <--cat face smiling
/Kurama enters the room/
Kurama: Sumiko are you…- (notices she’s kinda…mmm… undressed?) ok…? /blushes/
Sumiko: /still covering herself and blushing/ DO YOU MIND????
Kurama: eh..emm… y-yeah I-I’m sorry, call me when you’re done… /leaves and closes the door still blushing/
Botan: /trying to suppress her laugh/ I think you just made him blush.
Sumiko: /death glaring at Botan/ grrrrr… SHUT UP BOTAN! ¬////¬
-a few minutes later, after Sumiko got dressed-
/Sumiko, Kurama and Botan are standing in Kurama’s bedroom/
Sumiko: /her hands o her hips/ Ok Botan spit it out!
Botan: ok ok. ‘She’s still mad at me n.nU’ well you see; we got the research results that Koenma ordered as soon as you left his office Kurama. He thought that finding more about Yamimaru’s past would help find the victim he’s looking for here in the Ningenkai. Apparently you two are linked to this hunter’s past, and it doesn’t matter how many times we give rounds to the situation… it all leads us to you. We don’t know if he wants you both or only one and if he does who… that’s all we’ve got.
Kurama: I see…
Botan: So Koenma thought it would be better if both of you leave to Genkai’s since the hunter it’s probably trying to attack you…
Sumiko: Are you talking about the famous Reiko Hadoken master?? /smirk/that would be a very interesting visit.
Botan: ok so it’s all settled. Oh and Yusuke and the others are staying in Genkai’s also.
Sumiko: Fine then, we don’t want to get your mother in danger don’t we Suichi?
Kurama: /nods/ ‘I don’t like that expression on her face… it’s almost like she’s daring me to fight her’
Botan’s POV
Botan: eh? eh? /turns her face side to side looking at Kiyumi and Kurama/ ‘I don’t think these two are getting along… at least not with her attitude… but according to Koenma she wasn’t always like this…’
Flash back
Botan: Well Koenma-sama here are the results of the research… /handing Koenma some papers/
Koenma: /Reading/…mmm… this doesn’t looks good… it doesn’t matter from which point of view you see it… it always leads to Kiyumi and Kurama…
Botan: Why??
Koenma: well… they’re both related to Yamimaru in his past…
Botan: And how could they? Is this related to Youko Kurama?
Koenma: /nods/
Botan: then how come she’s related as well??
Koenma: Remember Botan; they’re both Kitsunes. And also it seems that Kiyumi and Kurama knew each other from before, it says something about it here… that would explain why she was acting like this… maybe she just had a bad experience with Kurama…
Botan: What do you mean Koenma-sama?
Koenma: Kiyumi wasn’t always like these… ever since she’s been living here at the Reikai she has been more cheerful than she is now. But since she met Yusuke and the gang… mmm…George!!!
George: Yes Koenma-sama!!
Koenma: Could you bring me the files of Kiyumi and Kurama as well???
George: Yes Koenma-sama!!
Koenma: I think we might be able to find out something if we search on Kiyumi’s past and check some lost spots on Kurama’s as well. Don’t tell them the she-and-Kurama-meeting-before thing ok? it isn’t sure yet and I want to research a little bit before. Especially, don’t tell Kurama.
Botan: eh…ok
End of flash back
Botan: well guys I’m leaving now… /climbing on her oar/ so… exactly when are you going to Genkai’s?
Sumiko: a.s.a.p (as soon as possible)
Kurama: what about… Wednesday?
Sumiko: sounds good to me.
Botan: ok see ya in Wednesday then. /leaves/
Sumiko: Well good night Kurama /turns around facing her back to him/
/Kurama holds her arm/
Kurama: wait a second, ever since I met you I can’t help noticing that you sort of don’t like me… did I offended you somehow??
Sumiko: … let me go /pulls her arm releasing it from Kurama’s grip/ I don’t know why you ask… is it so important to you that every body likes you?
Kurama: I didn’t mean that I just want to know why you hate me
Sumiko: hm… you’ll find out by yourself one of these days… I don’t need to tell you
Kurama: and why don’t you want to tell me now?
Sumiko: GOOD NIGHT /she lays down on her bed and covers herself with the blankets hiding her face/
Kurama: ‘why is she avoiding the subject?? Well I guess I should just leave it there… according to her I’m going to find it out “sooner or later”…’ /sighs/ good night /turns off the light, lays down on his bed and covers himself with the blankets/
-later that night-
Kurama was still awake looking at the ceiling; he just couldn’t sleep thinking why did the hunter was chasing him… and her. Then remembered the discussion they had earlier ‘She can’t just hate me for no reason, but I don’t remember meeting her before… not even in my Youko’s life… now that I think of it there are many things I can’t remember from my Youko life… in fact I can’t remember many details of how did I “died”, just the fact that I was “killed” by someone…….. uh??’ he could heard something that sounded like…moaning?? Then he turned and saw Kiyumi… she was shivering but… was she crying?? It seemed so… he couldn’t tell exactly if she was since she was facing her back to him ‘is she…crying???’ he didn’t knew whether to stand up and go check on her or just let her there…crying… maybe she didn’t wanted him to see her crying… then she turned… she was still asleep. She was having a nightmare. Then he decided to wake her up…
Kiyumi’s dream
A little girl runs towards a man. The man had a sad look on his face, he was a kitsune demon with beautiful blue hair and purple eyes.
Girl: Dad! Dad! /smiling/
The man catches the little girl who had fox ears and 5 tails (a/n: I dunno how many tails the youkos have but…it’s just to give u an idea); she had a silverish-pink hair and beautiful and big purple eyes. The man hugs her and whispers something to her ear, and then her eyes popped open
Girl: no… no it can’t… she was smiling… I SAW HER SMILING THIS MORNING! ……MOM CAN’T BE……SHE CAN’T BE…!!
The man hugs her as strong as he cans trying comforting her, he cries… the girl cries…
Man: Be strong… I’ll always love you… I promise we’ll go through this… together… because your mother…your mother would want you to be happy……forever/cleaning the little girls eyes from the tears/
Girl: /holding her father’s hand/ because my mother…would want US to be happy…father. /hugs him/
Man: Kiyumi…
The man hugs the little girl
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A young girl leaves her father, a teenage already. Lives all kinds of adventures. Then Goes back home…but the pain comes back…
Kiyumi: Dad? Dad! Where are you?... da…-
She stares in horror while her father’s corpse with multiple injuries is being held by a Youkai by the neck. No…he didn’t smell like a youkai…he smelled like…a hanyou. The hanyou says strange words… then her father yelps and his eyes stood open. He was dead. He was killed…
Kiyumi: /crying/ D…D…DAAAAAADD!!!!!!!
¿?: jajajajajajaja finally…its soul is sealed…, so this thing had a cub-vixen(a/n: I have absolutely no idea how the fox cubs are called sorry n.nU), mm how convenient… and I was in the need of a mate…
Kiyumi: …y-you son of a…!! I SWEAR TO GOD THAT I WILL KILL YOU WITH MY OWN HANDS!!
Kiyumi throws multiple water knifes to the demon, but the demon disappears
Kiyumi: what the…-
¿?: mmm… let’s see… silverish-pink hair… purple eyes… beautiful… you never get to see such rare vixens now a days… /appears in front of her holding her chin/ nice…
Kiyumi: uh!? LET ME GO YOU BASTARD /takes her chin away from his hands/ WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE!?? /shuts a water whirl against the hanyou but he disappears/
¿?: hahahahaha you’re aggressive. But you’re right how could I have been so rude?? Hm/smirks/. I’m Yamimaru, The greatest kitsune hunter in all of Makai.
Kiyumi: Hunter!?
Yamimaru: yes, you see; I’ve looking forward to hunt down the famous thieve Youko Kurama. I found out that you were his “mate” so I decided to set a little surprise for him.
Kiyumi: I am NOT Youko’s MATE
Yamimaru: Well he loves you right? That’s just enough for me. Since you are so important to him and you were going to visit your father I decided to wait here and capture you in order to get Kurama. But I got bored and decided to get a little of entertainment with your father. Yet he wasn’t that fun…
Kiyumi: Y-You… just killed him… for fun… i… /blowing in rage/
Yamimaru: I was planning on killing you both but I just changed my mind… I think I’ll keep you as my personal toy hahahahahaha
The ground opens and chains tie Kiyumi to the floor
Kiyumi: haaa let me go!! You sick bastard!!
Yamimaru: hahahaha such a spirit… you’re brave no one has ever talked to me like that you know?
Kiyumi: nooo let me go… noo…
Yamimaru: oh I forgot to tell you… my chains absorb your reiki so I suggest you stay still if you don’t want to die /smirk/
Kiyumi: no… Kurama…K-kura…ma…/faints/
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Kurama: Kiyumi-san, Kiyumi-san! /shaking her shoulder with his hand/
Kiyumi’s eyes popped open
Kurama: Are you…- /Kiyumi hugs Kurama/…o…k?
Kiyumi cries and starts shivering
Kurama: mmm /blushing/ it’s ok… It was just… a nightmare…
Kiyumi: /whispering/ no… It was… real… /releases Kurama, then dries her eyes with her hand/ I’m…sorry
Kurama: what do you mean?
Kiyumi:…nothing, just go back to sleep.
Kurama: what were you dreaming about?
Kiyumi: none of your business
Kurama: You called my name in your dream
Kiyumi: /shocked/no… I didn’t
Kurama: yes you did. What were you dreaming about??
Kiyumi: NOTHING /yells at Kurama’s face/… are you happy now!?
Kurama: no.
Kiyumi: just leave me alone!
Kurama: why don’t you want to tell me?
Kiyumi: I already told you because…!-
Kurama covers her mouth with his hand. Kiyumi blushes.
Kurama: Don’t tell me it’s none of my business because it is. Now tell me. /uncovers her mouth/
Kiyumi: /turning her head a side with her bangs making a shadow on her eyes hiding her expression/why do you keep asking me if I don’t want to tell you?
Kurama: why do you keep avoiding my question?
Kiyumi: fine! …I dreamed… with the past… are you happy NOW?
Kurama: you knew me in your past??
Kiyumi: you see I didn’t want to get to this! There’s no point in explaining things here if you don’t remember me at all! Maybe it’s just better this way…
Kurama: why?
Kiyumi: Some things are just meant to be forgotten… some things…that made you happy once…and hurt you later…
Kurama: I…harmed you?
Kiyumi: it doesn’t matter anymore… what you did… what you didn’t do…
Kurama: I’m sorry… if I did something to you
Kiyumi: why do you say you’re sorry for something you don’t even remember!? How can you be sorry if you don’t remember what you did!?
Kurama: then tell me! What did I do??
Kiyumi: I said it doesn’t matter anymore! Why do you keep doing such a problem for nothing!? Just go to sleep and leave me alone! /lies down on her bed and covers herself with her blankets/ just… forget that I was…crying
Kurama: hm /smiles as if he understood/ ok
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Sumiko: finally!! Found someone!! Do you mind telling me your name??
¿?: Don’t you recognize me!!? Geez… ok I’ll give you 5 min.
Sumiko: what do I have to recognize?? mmm wait… weird black hat, black hair, pendant, bat wings… OF COURSE!! You’re em… Kuronue right???
Kuronue: finally onna!!
Sumiko: sorry… n.n
Kuronue: So how long do I have to be here???
Sumiko: …mm… ‘til Yusuke realizes that the papers I gave him were fake and I’m discounting this from his salary
Sumiko and Kuronue: one week
Sumiko: exactly batman!
Kuronue: DON’T CALL ME BATMAN!!
Sumiko: BATMAN tarararararararararararararararan BATMAN!!!!!!! /singing/ BATMAN BATMAN BATMAN!
Kuronue: grrrrr COME BACK HERE!!!!!!!
Sumiko is running away from Kuronue
Sumiko: ahhhhhhhhh someone tell the readers to review!!
Youko: Review and I’ll show up in the next chapter! Right Su-chan??
Sumiko: YES /eyes heart shaped/ ahhhhh o.O YOU-CHAN!! HELP!! ONEGAI!!
Youko: mmm nah… this is fun…
Sumiko: FINE THEN YOU-CHAN I’LL HAVE MY REVENGE IN BOTH OF U!! /smirk/
Youko: o.O I don’t like that smile…o.O Kuronue!!! Leave her already!!! o.O ‘this is getting dangerous’
Wolfk
Aug 4 2004, 08:18 PM
JEJEJE

MUY BUENO:
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Kurama: ok, now would you mind explaining what’s going on here?
Sumiko: Sumiko is my ningen name. I used a mental trick to make your mother believe I was her friend’s daughter. I need a place to stay meanwhile I’m in the Ningenkai.
Kurama: And why my house??
Sumiko: ‘cause Koenma told me to live near by one of you so I won’t be hard to locate in case “we” have a mission; and what a better place to stay than one of the tanteis house. And I think you owe me a thank you since I took care of your mother ever since you said Koenma your mother would be in danger.
Kurama: /kinda surprised/ ohh so you never leaved…, thank you then. But how did you know who and where was my mother??
Sumiko: mages never tell the secret of their magic /blink/ now… can you tell me were can I get changed??
Kurama: Sure…uh… you can get changed here, I’ll get changed in the bathroom.
Sumiko: ok
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ERA DE ESPERARSE xDDD, PRONTO HAZ EL CAPITULO QUE SIGA SUMIKO^^

. AUUU SALUD!!!
ladycygnus
Aug 4 2004, 10:56 PM
Buena historia Sumiko.... realmente m gusto... vaya q t gusta Kurama ehh jajaja.... bueno hasta ahora tu historia va muy bien y como relacionaste a Kiyumi y Kurama es muy buena, creo q esta historia va para largo porq le veo mucho potencial, bueno sigue asi y espero ver lo q sigue pronto
Dione_Kido
Aug 7 2004, 02:45 PM
hoa bueno esto es mi review de del 2 cap xD n_nUUUU ahora leere el 3 xD mmmm eta mas o menos.... mmmm vamos amigap mas accion mas misterio !!! ok? n_n
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| Yusuke: T.T why meeeee, WHY FROM ALL THE CHARACTERS OF YUU YUU HAKUSHO WHY YOU HAD TO PICK MEEEEEEE!!!!??????? |
se nota que nadie quiere trabajar con tigo ... amiga amiga.. debes mejorar el trato que le das hacia la gente xD
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| Sumiko: o.O U USE SOAP ON YOUR HAIR!!!!??? |
wow!! ESA NO ME LA SABI.. pero creo k lo lei en otro fic xD en fin n_n que sorpresa xD jabon para el pelo mmm lo intentare xD cuando vaya a una convension de anime y me tenga que disfrazar... buen tip
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| Shiori: she’s he daughter of a friend of mine… a very good friend /gloomy face/. She just passed away last month… Since her daughter is now an orphan I decided to take care of her and let her live with us. She’s staying in your room tonight Suichi since the guest room is kind of filthy. I hope you don’t mind. |
te gusta colarte no? xD ayyyyyyyyyyy amiga.... se nota que tas ENAMORADA de kurama xDDD
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| Shiori: don’t worry Sumiko my dear; he’s a very respectful young man. (A/n: unlike many other guys that with a cute girl in their rooms… only god knows what they will do to them o.O) |
SI!!!! eso si

.... mmm puedo dar una sugerencia de que es o que podemos hacer con esos chicos irrespetuosso?

sencillamente n_n y todas las mujeres felices
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| Yusuke: ‘ I wish my mom were like that T.T’ |
que mas kieres tienes una mama alcoholica!! puedes hacer muchas fiestas en casa no? ten creatividad!!
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| Kurama, Shiori and Sumiko are eating. Shiori making comments to Sumiko about how Kurama was when he was a baby, embarrassing Kurama who was trying to cut in every time he’s mother was about to make a comment about certain things he did as a child he’d rather keep in secret; for example, a 9 year old running around his house naked XDD |
O.O eso fue demasiadop O.O mmmmmmmmmmm que wena vision!!
aunque que tierno n_n
| QUOTE |
| Yusuke: damn it!! She went out to drink again!!! Man I really wish she were like Kurama’s mother /remembers Kurama’s red face while his mother was talking about the running-in-the-house-naked thing/ mm I think I’ll just keep my mom n.nU |
heheh!!! si mejor kedate con tu mama xD y has un reventon en tu casa!!
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| Yusuke: o.O OH no what are u doin’ with tha… AAAAAHHH HELP!!!!! LET ME GO!!! NOOO GET THOSE SCISSORS AWAY FROM MY HAIR!!! AAAAAAAHH NOOOOOO… NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T.T |
te gusta torturar a ala gente no? xD
algunas aprtes me dieron risas otras O.O dam... esa imaguinacion que tienes eh!!
ssee ya
Dione_Kido
Aug 7 2004, 03:27 PM
hahahahah malla me arde la cara y me haces reir xD te lo descontare n_n
| QUOTE |
Sumiko: Muahahahahahaha like your new hair cut Yusuke???????
Yusuke: you’re mean T.T |
eso es MUY CIERTO
| QUOTE |
Kurama: Sumiko are you…- (notices she’s kinda…mmm… undressed?) ok…? /blushes/
Sumiko: /still covering herself and blushing/ DO YOU MIND???? |
que enferma.... creo k kurama tendra un trauma emocional x el resto de su vida xD
| QUOTE |
| Botan: eh? eh? /turns her face side to side looking at Kiyumi and Kurama/ ‘I don’t think these two are getting along… at least not with her attitude… but according to Koenma she wasn’t always like this…’ |
eso tiene un explicacion ESTA TRAUMADA ...
| QUOTE |
| Kurama: I didn’t mean that I just want to know why you hate me |
DESDE CUANDO ODIAS A KURAMA? xD eso esta raro xD
see ya
Sumiko Minamino
Aug 13 2004, 12:32 AM
Holas^^ chik@s. Vine para decirles q NO VOY A POSTEAR EL SIGUIENTE CAPITULO SI NADIE MAS POSTEA. y q ademas puede q me demore ya q, como en este foro la mayoría es hispano hablante, pense seriemente en traducir mi fic. Por eso si me demoro no peguen!! T.T okas??
Sayonara bye bye
Sumiko Minamino
Aug 13 2004, 12:44 AM
Weno aca les dejo un dibujo q hice de Kiyumi XD (en realidad iba a ser yo, pero como encontre otra foto para sumiko... solo imaginense a Kiyumi con orejas y cola de zorro y tendrán la idea)
PaoPao de Piscis
Aug 13 2004, 12:14 PM
Ya volvi! (problemas con la conexion

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Asi que esa es Kiyumi, ahora es más facil imaginarla, te quedo muy linda
Vas a traducir tu fic? eso va a tardar más tiempo, pero bue, supongo que tendre que esperar, aunque yo quiero ver (o mejor dicho leer) como sigue, quiero saber bien que paso en el pasado de Kiyumi, y si se lo va a decir a Kurama, Argh! me quedo con la intriga!
Por cierto, no importa cuantas veces lo haya dicho ya, muy bueno tu fic. Gracias por compartirlo.
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